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for CLAIMING KIN by Salome and Talon

by salomewilde

schedule September 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Rin is so cute. But she's going to be terrified when Kin or Sesshomaru touch her more intimately, after what she went through with the wolves. And quite obviously, the wolf leader was Koga. How will Sesshomaru reconcile Kin's new slave girl with his best friend, when she is going to be petrified once she sees him? The demons she lives with now obviously don't understand either that she is a human girl, and needs some privacy, at least at the beginning of her association with them. But I don't suppose she will be given that option?
person Inumimi1
schedule September 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Little Kin is so clever, being able to smell Rin's past & even being able to figure out her name! Poor Rin is sure going to be in for a big shock when she sees how Kin & Sess "play" & in for a bigger shock when the start to "play" with her! By the way, how old is Rin supposed to be?
person kitenkaiba
schedule September 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Yay Rin is so cute! Am I evil for looking forward to her adorable mix of panic want and uncertainty when they start getting intimate? Heh fantastic work as always cant wait for the next chapter.
person nalamacleod
schedule September 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I started reading this story awhile ago. I had forgotten to bookmark it and could not remember it's title or author. Seeing the updates, I almost jumped out of my seat with the joy of this being updated. I instantly remembered I had read this story and had enjoyed it.
person Inumimi1
schedule September 18, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Rin is here - what fun, hope Sess likes her once she gets all cleaned up. Looking forward to all the fun they will be having!
schedule September 14, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Yea! Another chapter! :D I so missed this story! ^^ And I also can't wait till we get to the Koga part, lol XD

Please write more as soon as you can

Thanks,
~Kera
person chibichibi
schedule September 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This fic is really amazing. You two have came up with such a creative and different fanfic. InuYasha is so adorable ! I can't believe it when I saw the update after such a long time ! Thank you so much ! Love the chapter ! I can't wait to read next chapter !
person kitenkaiba
schedule September 12, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Words can not express how happy I am to see this update, more soon? Oh happy happy! Ok breath *takes a deep breath*. Heh pore Sesshoumaru the way you described all the smells did make them sound unpleasant. I hope Rin wont get too sick, Kin would feel guilty then I think.
schedule September 12, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I wonder if Sesshomaru will find Rin any more appealing once she is cleaned up and proves to be a good-natured child. Or will he just leave her to Inuyasha? As a human, she will age so much faster than her masters, though, so what will they do with her when she rapidly becomes a teenager, then an adult, then an old woman? Okay, I'm rushing ahead again - many more years before that transpires! Will this child be the one to teach Sesshomaru to have some measure of affection for humans apart from his Inuyasha on moonless nights, and to take a little more interest in females?
schedule September 12, 2010 at 12:00 AM
"Kin is fucked." His voice is questioning and content, ....

"Entirely and...irredeemably," Sesshoumaru replies with a smirk.

Well that simply sums it all up right there doesn't it? What a deliciously wicked Chapter ladies. The dialog was smut-tastic!