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for CLAIMING KIN by Salome and Talon

by salomewilde

schedule June 10, 2011 at 12:00 AM
OMG...this is one of the best stories I have ever read in AFF.net...
There are millions of different emotions all over; its touching at certain places...and its totally perfect in all possible sense.
Though I didnt finish reading all chapies yet but its too good ^_^ (*bows down*)
Please continue & finish this story...Thanks to both Salome Sensei & Talome Sage for their excellent work!!
person NelaniDC
schedule February 13, 2011 at 12:00 AM
You know what when what I thought when I was reading this chapter. Reading what Kin is saying in the midst of passion I'd say Kin had grown up ! He didn't say a lot of childish things like he says in the before chapters. Am I right about that? Aww it's too bad our dear little Kin is slowly growing up but I'm really interested to know how he'll turn out to be ! xD
Thanks for the new chappie. Loved it,like always ! Can't wait to read the new chapter ! ^ ^
schedule January 5, 2011 at 12:00 AM
this is too good for words.......
the way that you write it makes it a completely different world! the way the characters interact with each other is amazing and you managed to get the dog pack mentality perfect. they are different than humans and in this story you can tell but still feel similar to them. i can honestly say i wouldn't mind living that life.
person Inumimi1
schedule January 4, 2011 at 12:00 AM
What a wonderful way to start the New Year!!! Looks like Rin is already fitting into the little family.
schedule January 3, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Yea! New chapter! With Smut! :D But but, you forgot to but a link to my fanart! D: *pouts* http://keraizaki.deviantart.com/art/FanPic-Happy-Kin-181521664
person destiny_18
schedule January 3, 2011 at 12:00 AM
*purrs* i absolutely LOVE how there were so MANY FUCKINGS IN EVEY SINGLE SENTENCE, EVEY PARAGRAPH, AND IN EVEY FUCKING CHAPTER. MY GOD MAN I FUCKING LOVE U. LOL totally gotta update soon!!!!!!
person kitenkaiba
schedule January 2, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Happy New Year!! What an absolutely wonderful first chapter for 2011, so very hot! Am I evil for being disappointed that Rin did not get ‘fucked’ by Kin yet…. Heh Sesshoumaru has come such a long way so very doting not and oooh Kin being a tiny little bit forceful~

Keep up the good work, love you both~
person natasha
schedule September 25, 2010 at 12:00 AM
really great chappie, poor rin though that she can't talk. but hopefully she will be happy with sesshou and inu now.
schedule September 25, 2010 at 12:00 AM
D'awww~ This chapter was sooooo cute! x3 I'm to sure how I feel about Mute Rin, but It's defentaly different ^^

Also, Tell Talon I'm still waitig for that note about the Harness, lol >,< Right now I just have a naked Kin, beacuse I wanna do the pants last, lol ;3

Thanks,
~Kera
person NelaniDC
schedule September 22, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Thank you so much for the update ! I enjoyed this cute chapter a lot ! Aww I feel bad for Rin's past. Well she's with Sesshoumaru and InuYasha now ! I loved Rin and InuYasha bonding part especially when InuYasha read Rin a story stumbling upon some word ! So Kawai ! I can't wait to see the next chapter ! Please update soon !
Oh and I saw the fanart ! That's was really beautiful too !