rate_review Reviews

This last chapter was great! There relationship is evolving at a nice pace. The way you write the two sides of Inuyasha Ken/Kin is very dynamic and interesting. Glad that Sess realizes he will keep Kin and that he didn't hook up with that bath attendant. Kin is really adorable and hope the next chapter comes out soon ^_^

I can't deny that i am enjoying this story. To find such blatant shota is hard. I love how Sesshoumaru keeps on thinking of the future where he will have complete controll over his brother. Kin is adorable. When I first read the chapter with Ken I was like....is Sesshoumaru goingto be taking in all his brothers. However, I like the idea of InuYasha/Kin's inner youkai having a slight mind of its own. Much better then him becoming a mindless monster. What will happen when the new moon comes. Will their father do anything when Sesshoumaru takes Kin with him? So many questions. You both are amazing writers, and I just want to let you know that is story is very good.

Ladies, ladies, ladies... GODS, what you do to me! I feel so incredibly GUILTY over how much I'm enjoying this! The language is amazingly evocative, sweet Kin and fierce Ken wrapping Sesshoumaru around their little... finger, even as they submit wholly to his dominance, Sesshoumaru wrestling with his feelings, even Jaken's loyalty outweighing his personal revulsion. I am just so taken with this; my head swims and my heart pounds, as well as the insistent, tugging sensation... lower, shall we say. FUCK... gods, just...fuck. So good.

holy shit. *fans self* this fic is all kinds of awesome. i eagerly look foward to reading more.

I really like this story. Hope you guys can get sometime together to write the next chapter. Its wonderful how the two of you who are such good writers are writing this together, its a sign of what is going to be one wonderful story. I like how each chapter is for a different character, and how you both write your own. I must admit I always enjoy a good AU, but its so hard to find one that is well developed enough to enjoy. Most fan fiction needs to rely on its founding story as background. This one seems to be able to stand on its own.
*looking forward to good things*

i love the way you two are doing this. with each person writing their own character, it keeps the characterizations true. this is such a dark, twisted, deep story, and i love it. it leaves me with the same feeling as driving past a terrible car accident. i don't want to see more, but i have to.

thank you for posting this amazing piece.

And no reviews yet??? The hell???


C'mon people...