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for CLAIMING KIN by Salome and Talon

by salomewilde

person TAYLOR
schedule August 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I hope you will update soon i fucking love this story. Sesh can't let Kagura touch Kin it is so unlike him to share. i want Kin to grow up a little so that the real fun can start...
person una
schedule July 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i looooooooove this story. please update soon. how old is Kin anyway?
schedule July 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Very good. I love the confused Sesshoumaru. It really changes things. I can't wait for the next chapter. I wonder if Sesshoumaru will really be okay with Kin being with Kagura. Just the thought of Kin and his sisters/brothers gets him mad. Maybe he is trying to cover up his own feelings with letting Kin come with him to see Kagura??? AH To may questions.
schedule July 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Back Review =]

"Kin Gets the Spank" (love the name of that chap, btw.) Loved the punishment. The way Kin is SO eager and willing to please his Onii-sama is riveting. And the way Sesshoumaru loses control and demands teeth...FUCK, that destroyed me. I love to see his conflict; the way he wants to fall so badly but refuses to do so, save for little slips here and there. HOT.

"Kin's Reflections" The simplicity of his thought process is wonderful. So very much a child. But his adoration and devotion rival that of an adult, no?

"Kagura's visit" Again, fucking HOT to see Onii flip out just a little bit. I shuddered when he snapped at Kin. And Kagura is so wonderfully Kagura, as I love to see her depicted: The perfect whore. =] The interaction between her and Sess and his conflicting thoughts between her and Kin was magic.

PART 2 PLZ.
schedule July 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!! YOU CAN'T LET ANYONE BUT SESSH TOUCH KIN!!!!!! It's just to....disturbing and Sessh's personality wouldn't allow it....as soon as she went to touch Kin he'd freak and yank him away (he he possesive much). I think Kaugra should only be allowed to touch Sessh but just this once because from this experience he should realize that it's just not as emotionally satisfying if it's not with Kin therefore he'll wait for him. Awww that would be sooooo cute ;). Anyways, just my opinion....but totally....KaugraxKin tooo gross...no love....and she's creepy lol. Thanks for the fast updates and can't wait to see what's next. Keep 'em coming I'm totally addicted!!! lol!!! Love you!!
person Truly~Wished
schedule July 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
So, as I'm trying desperately to write a suitable review and go back to skim a little, the next chapter comes up. Damn, and I'd almost figured out what to say too. basically, I'm not an Inuyasha reader, nor am I shota person. Never have been and probably never really will be. But I will be for you. This is an amazing story, fascinating and easy to read - nine chapters took me a while but it felt like minutes. I especially like the range of emotion you pack into each chapter. I just wanted you to know I'm enjoying it immensely and will be following along from now on.
person kunitsu
schedule July 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was such a fluffy chapter. No pun intended
person Maezy
schedule July 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Omg this is such a good fic I couldn't stop reading till I had finished all that was there ^^ can't wait for more
person Wilder
schedule July 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
absolutely love it! can't wait till Kin is completely claimed by his Lord Brother. The characterization and detail of this AU is amazing. great stuff... oh and your recommended reads look interesting but could you give a hint on where to find them, or the fandom at least? thank you
person kunitsu
schedule July 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh wow this entire fic is just so hot and nice. I love it