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for CLAIMING KIN by Salome and Talon

by salomewilde

person Izzanami
schedule August 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I think this might be my favorite chapter so far. And two updates in just a few days...you made my week!
person wolfluv
schedule August 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm not sure what others think but this story may just about have every kind of KINK there is but I must say that it is written with a style and a grace that is unexpected but in such a WONDERFUL WAY!!! I must say you two have out done yourselves in this story alone! It's a real story with heart and soul and it's PERFECT THANK YOU FOR SHARING IT WITH US! I look forward to reading it to it's completion!

THANK YOU FOR UPDATING
schedule August 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
It's sweet. You can feel how attached Onii is to his Kin, how much he's loved. As always, wonderfully done.
person alex
schedule August 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wow...u guys are really creative!
i guess ya'll must be good friends not to get wierd around each other by writting this
keep up the good work....this is one of my favorite stories to keep up with!!!
person Ivy
schedule August 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This last chapter was actually kind of sweet ^_^ Very interesting how you're building the story.
schedule August 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Very nice.
schedule August 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I don't see what the problem is with Sesshoumaru sharing Kin with Kagura. As a matter of fact, I see it more as him sharing Kagura with Kin. The possession is still there; even moreso because Kin must obey him by pleasing another while simultaneously fighting any possible jealousy and greed to have his Onii to himself.

Dare I say OH FUCK, yet again?
schedule August 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Another wonderful segment of Claiming Kin, thanks for the update. I really loved how you handled the threesome. My favorite part being the part where Sesshoumaru is having fucking Kagura and he is imaging it is Kin he is going into...:D really enjoyed that part. The Afterfuck was also loved, how he took Kin in the towel and cuddled him in his bed. I love the contrast.
person Izzanami
schedule August 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love this story, it is absolutley one of my favorites. I really like the way you did the threesome, it didn't leave me feeling bad for Kin, or like Onii shouldn't have taken him along, or that he shouldn't have been with Kagura. It was exactly as you said, it seemed to bring the two closer together. Kin is by far my favorite original character that I have ever read in InuYasha fanfiction. I love reading about him, he's so adorable.

You have done a great job keeping Sessh, very Sessh (I still want to call him Oniisama now in relation to this fic), while writing him with affection, almost obession for little Kin. I can't wait for the next update.
schedule August 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
So great. I really can't think of anything else to say, they are wonderful chapters and I was thrilled to see them when I got home from work. Thank you.