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for CLAIMING KIN by Salome and Talon

by salomewilde

person lildevil
schedule October 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
when are you going to add the ones with kouga if you already did then witch chapter is it cause those were the only ones i wanted to read
person Anon
schedule October 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
this fanfic is messed up. it should only be inuyasha and sesshomaru. not no kagura and kini~!
schedule October 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This chapter was so...rounded? No, that's not the word I was looking for. Something akin to vast; as in though it was only one chapter, there was so much going on. But the main feeling I got from it was Love. It's amazing how Kin has gone, in Onii's eyes, from being an annoyance, to a pet, to something cherished.

I couldn't stop smiling from the moment they landed at the base of the Goshinboku. That Sess was ready to share that part of himself with Kin, to even tell him that it was his special place where he used to go...to see him open up was wonderful. You know me, I'm not one for the WAFF, but this was SO much more than that. It was, perhaps, the opening of a new understanding between the two; Onii seems to be admitting to himself, little by little, that Kin is perhaps the most important thing in his world.

Need I even say that I loved it?
schedule October 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I just realized that it doesn't specify what chapter we're reviewing. So from now on, I must do this:

Chapter 19


I'm gonna fangirl here and say OMFG. That was so hot. That Kini takes so much pleasure in being their wetnurse is the ultimate hotness. And the way Kin seduced her in his own little way was insane.

*is intent on writing a milky fic now*

You captured Kin splendidly, I hope Auntie Talon loves this as much as I did.

<3


person aleabeth
schedule October 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful chapter :)
Thank you.
Alea
schedule October 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
"... but he had a vague suspicion that his brother's pretty fur might actually like it."

Classic! =^_^=
person Truly~Wished
schedule October 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Aw, they're so cute. I love this story, it's so fun to read and every chapter changes the tone of the story just a little.
schedule October 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
So good! Alternates between sweet and creepy . . . mmm
person Izzanami
schedule October 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I know I've said this many times before, but I love this story, I so love it! I love how everything that has changed with Onii and Kin has done so over a long while, not too quick, it makes it all the better now when you see Onii share something so special with Kin. I'm always left with this feeling that although there is so much depth already that we have just scratched the surface of this story, and the characters.

I can seriously say this is my favorite fic ever in the InuYasha fandom... really. You two have woven magic with words, and I'm just more impressed and in awe of this tale everytime another chapter is posted.
person Izzanami
schedule September 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I read this as soon as it was posted, but I was tired I waited to review. I loved the part where Onii was a little annoyed that he didn't pee as much as Kin, that was halarious, I could totally see him like that. I really love this fic, it is one of my all time favorites in my years of reading InuYasha fan fics. I hope you two keep it going for a long time to come.