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for CLAIMING KIN by Salome and Talon

by salomewilde

schedule December 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Too cute!! Too too too cute!
schedule December 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
:3

That was so cute that I could not care that I'm reading fluff, if that makes any sense. My favorite was the end, when Sess asked him if he wanted to stomp a whole village. After reading the first part, that made me lol irl.

Cuteness ^_^
schedule December 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This story is so hypnotic! I love it! I am eagerly looking forward to the next chapter!!!!
person JaguarsGirl85
schedule December 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ok I would like to start out by saying that Sesshy's internal dialog was PRICELESS!!!! I didn't know know whether to sympathize or laugh. I think if Inuyasha was redone staring Sesshomaru....IT WOULD SOUND JUST LIKE YOU WROTE IT!!!! You have truly studied Sesshy in a BIG way! I don't think I have ever experienced dialog that accurate before! The first few paragraphs took the cake!
schedule November 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh, I haven't reviewed this in a few chaps. Hm. I think that one of the things that stands out to me about this fic (besides the intricacy of the characters, the hot sex, the milkings, etc...) is the fact that each chapter can easily stand on its own, yet when combined with the others, creates more of a deepness to the fic as a whole.

Loving, still waiting for Kin to grow up a little bit, and eating every word until he does. <3 You guys are awesome.
schedule November 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
what to do what to do
schedule November 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG this is Great!! I can't wait to see what Sesshoumaru comes up with to protect Kin.....maybe a mating mark????? Let's hope so mmmmmmmm. lol. Keep up the great work I'm am well and truly caught. This story is favorited and checked daily for updates XD. ;) Thanks for all the hard work to keep us all satisfied.
person aleabeth
schedule November 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
awww... poor Kin and Oni :(
schedule November 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Poor, poor kin/Ken. Thanks for sharing!
schedule November 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
that was harsh.