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Now we know what's up with Jaken. He's a little masochist. LOL

A child's harness? That's a neat idea, even if it is a bit humiliating for a son of the Inu no Taisho. Will there be a leash as well? ^_^ I like how the leather worker thinks.

Congratulations on the noms.

Congrats on your nomination! I can't say I'm surprised :)
Another fine chapter as well.

I want to rush in with a broom and start swatting at Sess's head until he lets go of Inu so that I can grab him, take him home, and treat him to chicken soup and buttered rolls.

But otherwise, the story is written very nicely.

oh wow another person completely enamored with Sesshoumaru lol i can't help but think of how funny it will be when Kin gets older and starts to attract much more attention no matter how restricted he is LoL

Congratulations Salome and Talon—your story Kin Injured has been nominated for Best Darkfic/Horror at the Inuyasha FanGuild for the Fourth Quarter of 2008!

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Congratulations again!
ThisIsMeSmiling

This is the best fic EVER! I love Kin's personality. So kawaii

Some of my favorite parts of this fic are the interactions between Sess and Tai. Tai is so awesome, lol! Loves!

This was a great chapter, and I am glad that Sess is back to his normal self.

I like this chapter. Kin is so cute, waiting for his Onii. However, I think the best was when Tai had to remind his son. I wonder if Kini will indeed get to feed Ken like she wants to...It's so weird when I think about Kouga and Sesshoumaru doing anything. Don't know why. I mean Kouga is a prince and everything...but Sesshoumaru. I guess to me he is just so dominant...the only one who could top would be his father.

very powerful...

Sesshomaru needs his papa as much as Kin needs him

*sniffle* That was so sweet, even with the flogging, spanking, and rough fucking. Actually, the 'purging' was a bit cute. It's amazing how you are able to express how the pain purges the grief, and how the dominance forces dominance. You did a wonderful job in making the session a success. Personally, I'm not into bdsm, but I understand how your scenario works.

Ah, yes. I saw the spoiled child in the note as well. I think Papa just spoiled him again. LOL

I wonder if Kin is still afraid, even if he says he isn't. He didn't want to sleep until Sesshoumaru arrived. I'm glad Kini stayed with him. You are putting a lot of effort in developing her character. It's nice.

Well! That was a long chapter and there was obviously a lot of hard work put into it. Great chapter! And, like Oreo cookies and potato chips, it leaves one wanting more. ^_^

Thanks for a great read. ^_^

Snow