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for CLAIMING KIN by Salome and Talon

by salomewilde

schedule June 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Read everything from you on here, as I'm wont to do with new people I get to know.

Wow.

Good writing. Flows well. No grammatical pains. It's descriptive without being purple and full of emotion. All-in-all, very solid work. I didn't want to basically go "good job" over and over and over again, but if you want me to give you more detail on any fic in particular, I certainly will. In the meantime, I'm going to go sit naked in my bathtub with my arms around my knees and rock myself.
person Anon
schedule June 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I LOOOOOVE your story. So deliciously kinky! Sesshy's so in-character and yet you show a deeper side to him. I love the dynamic you have going on with Tai and Sessh. To be honest, I don't really think about Kin as Inuyasha at all; although that's probably not exactly what you were going for. But... I love it. Never thought of Kouga in this kind of pairing; I'm intrigued! This is totally one of my favorite fanfics. You both rock. Please, more!!!
person Ekuk
schedule June 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Really like the story. Getting used to the age thing, between a youkai and half-youkai, in a fictional story that takes place in the past!

And as per your request on FanFiction.net I am over eighteen...way over, born in 1966.
schedule June 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
So does Sesshoumaru mean that he loves Kouga more and always will or does he love Kouga and Kin equally just in different ways??
person aleabeth
schedule June 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
It seems like forever between updates... I am so on the edge of my seat to read. This entry was no exception! Fabulous! I loved how the letter's are just a tad formal in the beginning, albeit because of the eggshells Sesshomaru is walking on at first... and than quickly degenerate into the playfulness that only makes the reader anxious for the two to actually come back together physically to get just a glimpse of what they have together as lifelong best friends. Please tell me that 'meeting' will be soon!
person didi
schedule June 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Well..I guess this is the end for me. I love your story, which is saying alot for me since I dont particularly like Inuyasha and Sesshoumaru in a threesome. I totally am a fan of just an exclusive duo between the inu brothers, but you wrote this so well...that I enjoyed it. But I guess I have to stop before it gets more intense....I don't really like Kouga, he's just mean and rude to Inuyasha in the show, and to think about him with Inuyasha or Sesshoumaru is annoying. So imagine my dislike when he's included in their bed. I mean...I was bearing it for the parts with Kagura...and that bi*&^ is totally no worth Sesshoumaru's time. I don't like that wind demoness. urgh That's a no no for me. Good luck to your story and all. I'm sure you'll right more great ones.
person my_perversities
schedule June 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Whaaa!!! I love it!! This was so hot!!! Can't wait for the two to meet!! God that's going to be good (I'm drooling, among other things ;), just thinking about it). MMMM, threesome with Kin, Kouga, and Sessh, god I love fanfiction. Anywho, hope to see more soon, your ever adoring fan, my_perversities.
schedule June 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh wow I love this, and normally I don’t care for Kouga in any paring. This fic is wonderful and I can’t wait for the next update. Going over the reviews is a little annoying at times though, when Kagura came in and everyone started freaking out I found rather disheartening. The emotions are so well done and sexual freedom of all the characters is one of the things that give this story so much charm. I have never before been made to like anime characters simply for how they are betrayed in a fan fic, you truly make them your own and can make a normally bland character shine. I love you both pleas continue this wonderful story even if some done like or understand a few points of its charm.
schedule June 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I do so adore this story, especially the bits regarding Sesshoumaru and his father. Its a personal favorite little kink of mine, and you write them brilliantly perfect. Indeed, it may be your fault I got hooked on the idea in the first place and thus my massive fic 'Pride' ended up as it has. I do of course love the rest of it as well. I applaud you both. I did indeed like the last chapter with Sesshoumaru and Kouga's letters back and forth...they made me chuckle. I do enjoy the thought of the two of them together, even if I do not personally write them thus.

Anyhow, bravo and I eagerly await future installments.

~ Jessi
schedule June 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Kin finally getting what he wanted had me panting! The hottest chapter by far ^_^