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by tintin23

person KC
schedule March 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This story, I am so glad that its being written again, I really like it, very hot, keep it up.
person keka
schedule July 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love that yo are going to finish up this fabulous story. and i think you are doing a great job personally.
person izema
schedule July 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG OMG OMG OMG up date soon it is amazing!!!!!!!!
schedule July 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like the changes that you have been making. First fan fics can be really off setting, but keep writing. If you look at my profile, "Just a Little Rivalry" was my first one. LOL

I read the original of this, so I can't wait to see some chapters out.
person asiankitty
schedule July 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like how the second chapter ended, and I have a feeling that it might be one of Naraku's minions. Great job so far!
schedule July 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
ohhh, a very interesting start, I have only a slight idea of what is going on, and already I can see that this is going to be alot of drama. You could make it a very action filled story with inu trying to save kagome for his own devices, but make the atempts on life happen alot cause if it is a very powerful person after then thats what would really happen. I love a intimidating dominating inuyasha keep up the good work and if I think up anything else that might be good in the story I will holla at u. Update soon.
person Ice
schedule June 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
hey, I like you're story so far. ^_^ hope you update soon.
person emilia
schedule June 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i wish you would hurry up and finish it i've waited a little long for it
person tintin23
schedule June 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I know there has been a lot of people waiting for the end of this story. And I'm trying, I already have about 56 pages saved to my computer. I actually took the original story and just changed it completely. Remember please that this story is not mine, but a late friend of mine. This is my first fanfiction ever so be a nice to me. I'm kinda pull all this stuff out of my butt here. I will update once ever 2 weeks, maybe less, but I want to drag this story out as long as possible.

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