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for Fire and Desire

by Ahya

person Kris
schedule January 10, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Love. Love. Love.
person Anon
schedule September 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
person Lillian9
schedule June 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Well, I liked the end of the story. Every other end wouldn´t be that believable. Which girl likes to be called a whore? As if he didn´t do Kagura while Kagome was away. Why is it that the guys can sleep around as much as they like but if a girl does the same she is called a slut or whore? That´s not fair.
schedule June 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That is a joke right? You leave it like this? I hoped it would have a happyend but what can i do? Notink, heh.
person sugar0o
schedule June 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
this begs for an update, a sequel! please!
person L0VER
schedule June 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
aww, honestly. .. that was kinda of unexpected.. and yeah, I didn't really enjoy it. I thought the quality and quantity of this chapteris nothing compared to he others (and no, its not only the sex). But yeah. it's just how it ended. but i do like the story in general., hope you start anotherone!
person Lunar84
schedule June 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like your story, but there are often times you switch from past to present tense throughout paragraphs. Other than that it looks good.
person Anon
schedule June 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow! This was really...Wow!! Great job! Keep up the good work!
schedule June 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Woooooooooooow i have to say this is an amazing story so far you have a real talent for writing i love all of your stories i cant wait until you update this one because it has left me wanting more and left me on the edge of my seat so i cant wait until next time ^.^
person Anon
schedule June 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?