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by 4arrows

schedule July 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*still clutching her sides and crying in laughter* D-Dear...sssssweet... *gasp* m-mother.... of all *cackle* that... issss... *more laughter* UNHOLY!!!
schedule July 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
omg this story is wacked in the head. I could not stop smiling at Sesshoumaru's crazy antic. This is to much. I want to laugh until i cant
breath anymore this is the coolest story i have read so far.
schedule June 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
In the distance they heard a squeal of delight “Oh Miroku, Yes! Yes! Yes! You've got it. Oh, bounce for me baby!”
ROTFLMAO
To think when there about to do it they role play.
I think you have had the Bender line .
Love the story.
^Dei
person snowbird
schedule June 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Chap 8 was the perfect finish and so very funny. My fav was Kagome's image of the wild boar scene. Sesshoumaru supposedly being OOC is carried too far by some people constantly wanting nothing from him except an emotionless, stoic manner, and few words. That can only go so far. Besides, if you watch him very closely in the anime (not even counting the manga), there are many emotions displayed by him. I could make a long list of what I saw. Just because he was never as mouthy as Inuyasha, didn't mean that he was any less emotional. I thoroughly enjoyed your cute little comedy.
person Anguloce
schedule June 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
omg sesshy watching sponge bob...awesome.
schedule June 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oooh Thank you he stopped !
But only because he was called the one thing he was trying not to be a 'spaz'.
It was sad.
But I got to admit, everything he would say after CLICK was funny .
Write more soon!
^Dei
person Nells
schedule June 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Amazing that he hasn't stumbled onto some porn channels yet...

*hint hint wink wink*
schedule June 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was too funny..... hope you continue!!
person saiyajin princess
schedule June 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i laughed too hard.. poor sesshoumaru.. i never thought of torturing him in that way in a fanfic before. heh.. mind if i use some of that idea for one of my fics??? i cant wait til the update.
schedule June 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
WOW!
Sesshoumaru is a good actor.But now he's crazy.I can't stop laughing but that's kinda sad how he's all messed up cause of tv.Damn you television!Lol.What's gonna happen next?
^Dei Dei