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May 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
nice start
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May 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
sounds interesting so far, I'd like to see where you're going with this. Only one mistake I noticed... Inuyasha turns human on the New Moon... not the Full Moon. that's all. hope to see more soon!
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May 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
The premise is good but there are a few major errors- Hakama are pants -not kimono or haori top... InuYasha goes to his human state when it is a new moon, not a full moon. Please correct these blatant errors and it will be perfect.
DLS
DLS
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May 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
this was great but it was too short. will there be an
update tonight. i hope so because i want to know what
happened to make koga do such a thing. and where were
the others while this was happening?
update tonight. i hope so because i want to know what
happened to make koga do such a thing. and where were
the others while this was happening?
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May 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Okay, this is really good. I really don't like fics where Kouga is portrayed as a bad guy because he would never do something like that. But, the fact that Sess came to Inuyasha's rescue was really nice.
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May 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
May I have some more Please???? Great opening page!!!! I look forward to reading more of this story!!!
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May 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i hope you update soon i like it so far