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June 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
update please... i was hooked at the first sentance
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June 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
short, short chapters are okay if they equate to quick, quick updates. i like the dark possibilities of this story, but i don't think it will be easy to fully examine the ramifications of the emotional pain in such short chapters. i will wait eagerly to see how you do it.
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June 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Sad and sweet. I really like it. I'm really looking forward to your next up-date.
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June 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
love this story!!!!! can't wait for you to update!!!!!!!!
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June 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I find this incredibly interesting so far. The situation is unique and thought provoking. Sesshoumaru personality is amazingly accurate. I can't wait to read more.
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June 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oooh I like. What is he going to do to Kouga I wonder. Don't you just enjoy reading about brotherly love. Keep up the great work.
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May 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wicked!! I cant wait to see what happens next!!
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May 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Sounds promising. But I would suggest that you get a beta-reader. There were a few minor errors. One of which is: As it was a full moon, Inuyasha was in his human form... It should be moonless night or new moon. Inuyasha turns human when there is no moon in the sky. And the name of Sesshoumaru's dragon familar is Ah-Un.
Hope you will continue with the chapter soon. I would like to see how the plot turns out.
Nemesis ^_~
Hope you will continue with the chapter soon. I would like to see how the plot turns out.
Nemesis ^_~
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May 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
NEAT STORY!! I hope you update again really soon!!
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May 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I hope there is more on the way.It was sad ,maybe things are going to get better?