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November 21, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Oh my god I love you
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May 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
HOLY HELL!!!!!!!!
basically, i'm not too sure if i can even finish this, i'm laughing so hard.
basically, i'm not too sure if i can even finish this, i'm laughing so hard.
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May 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really loved your story, it's a rare thing to see this paring in any form of a readable way. Though I have 2 concerns, one is at the bottom of the page on chapter 3, it seems like you'll be making more chapters, and the story so far contain enough content to do so without butchering it. Secondly what's with the Starbucks, Olive Garden, and Barns and Nobels, it appears as if that you've randomly placed elements for humour, that haven't been so well sewn into the story.
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May 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
sorry but what a ridiculous fic this is! did you get inspired by the stupid movie "idle hands" or something? and what's up with the slang usage and other stuff from modern day? is this in the feudal times, you mentioned shard-hunting, or is it in the future? very confusing. nice try but i don't think i'm interested in reading the whole thing. but don't discourage, it's still very funny, just not for my tastes is all.
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May 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow! Wtf is going on? A starbucks, barnes & noble and an 0live Garden, 500 years in the past while they hunt down naraku and jewel shards.... i am so confused!
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May 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
O M G this is the best thing i have read in a long time good job!!!!
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May 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
LMAO
this is great, i love it
i can barely wait for then next part
please update soon
this is great, i love it
i can barely wait for then next part
please update soon
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May 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Okaaaayyyyy.....WTF??!!
This story is SOOO weird.
I like it!!!
Sesshoumaru is a bad bad dog leaving other peoples penis' around just to go up a womens kimono.
Soooo what time IS this story in???
How do you go from a nail salon to a village?
Or from a hot spring to a Barns & Noble?
I like the weird-ness so far!
Write more soon.
Love Always^
^Dei Dei
This story is SOOO weird.
I like it!!!
Sesshoumaru is a bad bad dog leaving other peoples penis' around just to go up a womens kimono.
Soooo what time IS this story in???
How do you go from a nail salon to a village?
Or from a hot spring to a Barns & Noble?
I like the weird-ness so far!
Write more soon.
Love Always^
^Dei Dei
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May 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Is Miroku gonna have to buy it back from a vender or something??
lol
lol
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May 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wow .. she show talk to sessy about some of those things... please please more .. later for now
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