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for sleepless bite

by nightshade41230

person labelle
schedule May 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i do not wish to be mean but this story is posted in the wrong section i highly suggest it goes into another category since the one you posted it in is sess/kag and from your summery that is not the parings you have said. it's just a helpful hint nothing more. other than that you have a good idea and it is a good story... though a little proofreading would not hurt in some places. overall keep on writing i wish you the best.