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Holy crap, that was f***ing hot! Gave me some wicked ideas . . . MEOW!

ok, first he took her while she was chained, then she reversed the role. By now I think it`s quite obvious what they feel for eaach other, so I guess the next chapter will eal with both of them makining love to each other, instead of just primal sex. What I do not agree with is how you showed Sesshoumaru wanting to know when Inuyasha turned human. That is just plain OOC for him, for even though he does not like his brother he has honour, and never intended to steal it or to esploit a weakness, alway fighting fairly, yet still deadly and viciously. I also wonder, whether we will see Kagura be set from from naraku in your story or not, so there is still the chance of installing a plot, as of know I cannot discern one, nevertheless the story is still quite good and begs for a update.

Hello ! After the first chapter, I thought : well, a little vulgar but good enough for a lemon, pure smut ; and if you had lenghten, first : their thoughts on each other and what arrived during the intercourse, second : what happen (in sensations) between the foreplay and the release (too speedy !), it would be PERFECT !
Second chapter : the same. But after reading the story, I can say that I like it. I find it refreshing, I laughed and they are CUTE together !
So, thank you very much for your story !

From a mommy,french reader,

Bonjour de la France !

Merely Truth