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August 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i gave u a 4, i really enjoyed ur story... and i would have given u a 5, but I HATE CLIFF HANGERS! sorry but i like it when the story ends, ties everything up into a nice n neat little bow, and has a happy ending. but i still really loved ur style of writing. oh n one little thing... it only bothered me cuz it sounded kinda gross, its called goose-BUMPS not goose-FLESH, it makes a big difference, it kinda thru a wrench in the middle of ur story for me... until i eventually figured it out, lol it takes a while for my brain to switch gears. well thanx for the little distraction, n keep on writing!
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June 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ooh . . . bad Sesshoumaru, leaving poor Rin there to finish the job he started. Shame on him. Kudos to you for the naughty goodness.
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May 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Add more soon! This was awesome ;-)
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May 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm sorry I don't understand the ending what happened? I guess I don't understand the question and then her answer and his reaction? I still nice though just confused. Please clarify. Thanks!
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May 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Damn!!!! Now I'm not a prev, and I don't know what age Rin was....But speaking as a woman....DAMN SESSHOMARU!!!! Leaving a girl hanging!!!!......Good job!!! That's all I can say...Good job!!! I hope there's more......
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May 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
good till the end. the end suck.