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for The Childbitch

by salomewilde

person Ivy
schedule May 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This story was harsh but still good! Guess the peversity got me ^_^ Add more chapters to this, please!
person Lola
schedule May 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was hot!!! And Sess kept changing it up and somehow Rin still remained really cute ;-) Update this soon, because this is too good to be a oneshot.
person Peya Luna
schedule May 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
does it make me a bad person to ask for more of this stuff? probably..but i don´t care ;-) More, PLEASE!!
person teamplayer
schedule May 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
now thats an eye widener.
person yellow101
schedule May 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
there was nothing about this i didn't like.
person wein6
schedule May 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Now thats a story.
person Amadoni
schedule May 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Loved it. Yes, I'm a loli fan. Now, all you need to do is add one more chapter and it would be Puuurfect. *Hi, my name is Amadoni, and apparently I'm a hentai*
schedule May 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*smirk*

You know well how I feel about this piece. You succeeded admirably in the face of challenge. And posting it here, on aff.net...ahhhh...*purrs*

Well, it makes for a quite happy Talon, that's what it makes.

Neverfear, I will work on your reward...as you well deserve one.

In the meantime, consider this. The anal sphincter is capable of stretching...quite...a bit.
person orvida
schedule May 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wow such pain and or pleasure depending on whose side your on. child abuse by any other name is still child abuse. but the way you wrote it from sesshomura's piont of view her life belongs to him for he saved her on more than one occassion.
schedule May 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
that was something alright.