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August 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hahaha! Hell, that's funny! I literally laughed out loud, reading this! You did great in doing bad...
I especially loved this part:
"... then suddenly his seed sack hit her nerve-packed love button and she saw stars as her body shattered into bliss, shuddering like machine-gun recoil"
Certainly some climax! I haven't stopped grinning until now...
Bad fiction can be good sometimes.
I especially loved this part:
"... then suddenly his seed sack hit her nerve-packed love button and she saw stars as her body shattered into bliss, shuddering like machine-gun recoil"
Certainly some climax! I haven't stopped grinning until now...
Bad fiction can be good sometimes.
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May 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?