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August 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Liked it!
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May 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Good stuff. Solid, sexy writing, an original, provocative concept and disturbingly kinky description. I really enjoyed the allusion of Kohaku's fascination with Kagome's legs. I'm borderline wanting you to continue with that train of thought, especially considering the added spice of Kikyo's disembodied involvement. Twisted, and I love it!
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May 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Very interesting take on the situation. DLS