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for Shippo and the Ribbon

by salomewilde

schedule May 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
whooooooa talk about naughty! ^_^
schedule May 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
oh, wow. i have some definite respect for you. great plot, great angle, great wording... i nearly lmao reading it. good for you.
person MomoDesu
schedule May 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Magical happiness ribbons. LMAO. I could even envision Shippou's super big teary eyes when he learned he couldn't have any. Nice to have a good laugh to start my morning!
schedule May 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Sorry you didn't win, but this was funny.
person madmiko
schedule May 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Very funny! Poor Kagome, stuck with trying to wiggle her way our of that explanation. LOL!! Of course, they weren't really keeping it a secret if Inuyasha had already told Miroku what they were doing. Figures he'd indulge in a little locker room bragging. Loved the "Spank the Hanyou" remark at the end. ^_^
person Riecumbee
schedule May 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG that was fucky hilarios I hope you write again soon I can't wait 2 read
person inugirl2003
schedule May 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Very inventive. I loved the "didn't win any awards whatsoever" thingy, that was hilarious. Curious to read more from you!! Please keep writing.
person LovelyJaded
schedule May 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was hilarious! I loved it! lmao!
schedule May 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Real cute, you should write "Spank the Hanyou" just to complete it.

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