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Good update, and good reasoning on Inuyasha's part. I hope it pays! Looking forward to seeing what happens next.

Glad to see this update. Really like this story.

Am so glad you updated this its really good. Hope to see more.

Yay! You updated! And what a sweet, tender moment. Awww... That image of them all in bed together is totally squee-worthy. Sometimes, a slow, simple chapter is good for a little break up of all the action. Now, though, I'm looking forward to their game!

This is a good story I hope you continue am looking forward to the mating.

So good, can't wait for your next update.

Very sexy love scenes. Can't wait for the anal chapter.

I like this story and I have been enjoying it, I especially like how your trying to make them equal. But having said that I think that establishing that Inuyasha has the smaller cock is a mistake and would only serve to cement his inferiority complex and force him into "beta" roll in the relationship. I know it seams petty but combining it with the fact that Sesshomaru had kagome's first time, his far greater experience his most probably better body (if his greater height is any indication) and the fact that sesshomaru is a full demon would probably leave inuyasha feeling so self conscious he wouldn't be able to get hard no matter how comforting kagome's words or arousing the situation (this not even taking into account the fact that sesshomaru is lord of the western lands so has great wealth and influence where as all Inuyasha has are the clothes on his back and tetsuiga)not to mention the fact that having the girl you care about blatantly acknowledge that you are smaller that her other lover would be a huge mood killer. The only solution to this would be to have them both the same size or even have Inuyasha bigger. as sesshomaru wouldn't suffer from the self consciousness due to his other advantages. I know it seems minor but it feels like it would be the proverbial "icing on the cake" of inuyasha's inferiority and self confidence issues. Otherwise I like where this story is headed.

I really like this story and I didn't know it had been updated. So I haven't read or reread it in a while but I'm glad I did today because I really enjoyed the last few chapters. While I can't wait to read more of it, there's something I'm dying to know..what does motorboat mean????

LOL, cute ending. That expression should be easy enough to explain. I liked this chapter. It was pretty easy to figure out what they were arguing about, although I didn't put two and two together with their need to mark her at the same time. Hearing their back and forth, I knew what it was about, but figured it was just because they wanted to take that next step. I agree that Inuyasha should go first, being smaller. Smaller trumps experience. He loves her so much, and is so obsessed with not wanting to hurt her, that he'll definitely not hurt her. And with what Kagome has planned to 'make up for it', I'm definitely looking forward to the next chapter! =-)