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OMG, so good; please update & finish soon!!

I don't know how I didn't come across this little jewel before. You have caught my attention! There are some grammar/spelling errors and occasional places where I got lost due to a possible missing word/letter, but there's only so many times you can re-read and edit your own story without a beta before you go crazy. I get that, lol. I usually am notorious about getting distracted by mistakes like these, but I was sucked into the plot so much and in too much of a hurry to keep reading that it didn't really bother me. Other than that, I thought it flowed well and enjoyed your style and dialogue. It's well thought out and more complex and creative then I was originally anticipating, which is very refreshing. I'm surprised I haven't found this story sooner. Now that I have, I feel I have come to the worst cliffy ever with chp 4, lol. I really hope you update soon! Maybe as a Christmas present?? (^_^) Thanks for writing! I will keep checking for your next installment.

Excellently written. You have clear knowledge of how to write an engaging, believable story, and your alternate universe is rich and rife with possibility for exploration.

More to the point, it's refreshing to see quality writing like this nestled between the tripe that usually gets posted here.

I hope very much that you'll continue this story.

It is good to see this story being worked on again. I started following it on MM when you first started posting it so long ago. Hopefully you have a few chapters waiting to be posted. I can wait, I've been patient, LOL

So the band of seven has got Kagome, Rin, and Sango. Hopefully their men will save them! Come on Miroku, Inuyasha, and Sesshoumaru!

Hi, just checking up again - wondering what happened to you....

WOW!
I absolutely love your story. It's totally original and I can see so many great places where you can go with this story. Somehow I have a naughty hunch that Rin/Sango/Kags will be abducted for the auction at Mimisenri’s. I really love your writing and congratulate you on eliciting a review from me (I'm a lazy one). I'm dying to read the next chapter.
I have a question though: Would you like a beta? I haven't really had much experience but if you're interested, I'm offering.
Much love and hails,
Jay

Well written. I'm enjoying your story so far and I'm wondering where this is heading...other than the obvious kidnapping that is about to take place. Please keep writing. I'm awaiting yoru next chapter.

all good stuff. well written, intriguing, eloquently detailed characterizations and settings. i will be in eager anticipation of future updates.

thank you,
ginny

Three cheers for what looks like it's going to be well-written story in a well thought-out AU!

To think, I almost didn't click (I'm AU jaded recently), but this is great. Please continue, I'm on pins and needles.