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for Proserpina

by Cathartesaura

person hotlanta
schedule June 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
LOVE! ADORE! I AM CRAZY ABOUT THIS STORY! Please give me another chapter. :)
person sakura
schedule June 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
update soon? i don't want this story to end!
person rachel
schedule June 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
yay yay yay yay! i loved it extremely! i hope you continue with another chapter, and many many more! it would be interesting to see where the story progresses. will inuyasha ever see kagome again? will kagome ever have feelings for sesshoumaru? ahhh these questions i have..
person snowbird
schedule June 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I just had to go back and read this chapter again. I love it. It's hot! I know it was N/C but at least he prepared her which meant her body accepted him even if her mind didn't. I just hope she is soon over her wimpy crush on Inuyasha. To me that's how I always saw her feelings for Inuyasha in the anime. Of course, I'm dying for another update even though it hasn't been long since the last one. Your story has got me wanting more.
person akasha
schedule May 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
ok, i'm ready to find out what the little shock of energy is all about. apparently there's something to it. i sincerely hope that you update, i want to know what is going to happen to kagome now that sessho is determined to keep her. i love it so far, please keep up the good work! looking forward to more....
schedule May 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I was not going to read this, because of the Summary was a bit off, but I admit that I am very glad that I did. It turned out better than I expected it to be.

When I read this I was surprised with how well the story evolved. I am very pleased with how Kagome got kidnapped and how Sesshoumaru marked his scent on her!

Good luck
Keep up the good work!
person amadoni
schedule May 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was so worth the wait. <3 <3
person snowbird
schedule May 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Thank you, thank you. I very much enjoyed your repost of this chapter. You're no longer mean. You took pity on us readers by taking away some of the cliffie. Hum, so he's still in her. A true dog does not just pull out right away. It has to wait for the bulge to go down. This is part of the process of pupping a bitch. A few rare numbers of authors write this in which is the correct way to pup a female since he is a "dog" demon. The tingle is a new one though. Maybe that tingle was the afteraffect of his sperm fertilizing one of her eggs. I like guessing on things to see if I'm anywhere near right. I'm glad he kept her. Now for her to gradually rid herself of her stupid girlish crush on Inuyasha to be replaced with love for Sesshoumaru. Which I know isn't going to happen over night. Also, I thank you with a big, deep bow of humble appreciation that I wish more authors would do. He has BOTH arms! Yay! I hate him with one arm. I've always disliked that part of the anime, even though it's returned in the manga. I eagerly await the next update.
schedule May 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Good stuff. Keep going. Shess enjoying a pregnant Kagome would be great.
SailorNemesis
person amadoni
schedule May 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Holy crap, update soon. That is a definite cliffhanger.