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for Proserpina

by Cathartesaura

person Tori
schedule June 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I have to say the story brings a nice twist, I enjoy the fact that its all about the sex, and thats it. Keeping them in chara, I enjoyed as well. I find it interesting twist that, Sess, won't give her back. But I like the fact that he keeps her, would it be forever, it would be fun to see, what the future would hold if this was still the case, of it being sex years from now. Would Kagome drop everything cause he called her for a quick rut. XD
Sorry ran away, I thought it would be a good sequel.
Anyway, I wanted to say keep this up, the story is good and I enjoy it lots. I can't wait to see what Inuyasha and the gang handle this. Will they except this lost. I love it its fresh,the story reviles the senses. Good work

Tori
person denena
schedule June 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
you have a wonder with words. this story is a complete package with all the elements that make it fantastic. i can't wait until your next chapter. i'll be eagerly awaiting..
person Kitty
schedule June 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm loving this fic PLEASE write more soon!!
person Amadoni
schedule June 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is probably one of the best non-con, hostage situtions that I've read in awhile. Update soon!!
person Anon
schedule June 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This fic is very interesting, even if the plot is somewhat old. Sesshoumaru is very in character, if not a tidbit too cruel (for my taste). But that´s ok. It´s very exciting anyway.
Poor Kagome. I hope she will be able to escape this fate. I think her reaction to the things he did to her to be very realistic, by the way. She doesn´t like what he does, even if he is the Sesshoumaru, as in too many other stories.
Keep up the good work!
person Anon
schedule June 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
YAY an update finally YAY n\more porn thans
person Viper
schedule June 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Poor girl! I can't wait to see what happens next!
person snowbird
schedule June 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for the update. I had to laugh when I pictured him in my mind carrying Kagome the way you described. Aw schucks! So he has control over his sperm. Then what was the tingling for? Also, why did he have to check his semen to make sure it was inert? I think it would be funny if he got the shock of his life with pups from her. heehee. Does he actually mean to keep her for the rest of her life? So he intends to make her his concubine since he does not want a human as a mate to pup with. In fact, I think it would be fate's revenge on him to accidentally pup her. I wish I could remember the name and/or author of a story I once read of where he pupped Kagome during their first time together. He, also, thought he had control over his sperm. It was set in moderm times after the well closed and she met him. He was still un-mated and watching over Rin's ancestors. If you or anyone out there knows this story, please list it in a review here. I would most heartily appreciate it. I hope you don't mind me requesting this during my review to you. I thank you. Anyway, I believe that once Kagome gets over the shock of everything thats happened, I think Sesshoumaru's going to have his hands full with her. I like a Kagome with fire and a back bone. You've got me all excited with your story. I like lots of good sex, too, but a good plot to back it up helps to make the sex even better.
person akasha
schedule June 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
too short!! can't wait til next update! i've enjoyed this story so far. will inu & co. try a rescue attempt? And when will we find out what the weird the tingling sensation that kagome experienced was? pretty pretty please update soon!
person snowbird
schedule June 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Here I am again. This is merely a request for an update. I'm even on my poor old fat knees, begging. heehee. This story is on my fav list and I check it every day.