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please update i'm absolutely dying without another chapter!!

Nice story. At first I didn´t want to read it because the plot is a bit used by now. But then I did, nevertheless, and I didn´t regret it. It´s very well done. It´s very realistic, both Sesshoumaru and Kagome are in character.
Just one thing: As I read the comment at the end of chapter 5 I just had to look to your profile. You don´t write marriage, fluff and pregnancy. That´s ok (at least with me), but I have a wish: could you please not write another torture- fic? Please let Kagome get away on her own and not fall madly in love with "Sesshy" and please don´t let her obsess over him sexually! Please! =P

I'm sad but I wish you luck with your story for those that enjoy it. You're a good writer. I just wish you would use your talent and do an indepth, emotional story about them. Your comment killed my interest and I'm dropping the story from my fav list so this is good bye.

I just read your comments in the last paragraph of this chapter. I hope I misunderstood your meaning. Is what you said to mean that this story is not going to have a happy ending? Do you mean to say that they are not going to fall in love and eventually become mates? That there's nothing but sex between them in the future? Sex is good but without a plot, it means nothing and a lot of the enjoyment of reading it disappears. If your answer is yes to my questions, then my enjoyment for this story just flew out the window and I will quit reading it. That would make me sad because I had high hopes and excitement with the beginning plot of this story. I'm a romantic at heart and don't like to read lemons just for the sake of smut. I like romantic smut. Please tell me my fears and sad heart is for nothing and that you do plan a future for them.

wow u have a great story! update plz!

Please update! Please oh please! I really, really love this fic! So update fast and make it good. Though all of it ahs been good in the previce chapters.

Wow, your lemon writing skills are really good. Sesshomaru is a cold hearted bastard. Poor Kagome! She seems defeated. I hope Inuyasha can find, and save her, from the hard cruel fate that Sesshomaru intends for her. I would hate to see her unloved and used, unable to ever see her friends and family again. Hurry Inuyasha! Knock some sense into Sesshomaru so that he will suddenly realize how much he needs Kagome in his life! Thanks for the read!

~Rin

i enjoyed your fic very much. keep up a great job.

I'm very pleased with this fanfiction - most authors are all into as you say 'Mating/Marriage followed by babies, fighting a few wars etc and thats it. Its nice to see something a little bit different. Well done!

man you certainly do not disappoint. i check your story everyday and i love the way this is going. please please please update soon!