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for Proserpina

by Cathartesaura

schedule July 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OH. MY. GOD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! That was absolutely amazing. I cannot even express how perfect that last chapter was I love love love it I am completely distraught that it's over. :( That was just a wonderful and amazing story thank you so much for such a good read and I hope to see more of your work in the future!!!
person Yukii
schedule July 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG this is soooooooo good, I can't wait for the next installment. Write more soon!!
person A. Frost
schedule July 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love this fic so much, could you please send me an email when it is updated ;)
person lyian
schedule July 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ehhh I really cant wait till u update!!!!
person ....
schedule July 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I loooove this story...please update soon
person A. Frost
schedule July 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
dAMN! I love this story so far: its intense, dark, and smutty. You are a talented writer and really have a way with evoking the sensations and emotions that you intend to have your readers feel. good job :)
person ME
schedule July 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ok, question. I know this fic is loosly based on the Hades Persephonie myth. So far Seshoumaru has taken Kagome and is dragging her to his stronghold. I am just wondering if you are finished with the myth and now going your own way completly, or if there will still be a few similiarities. Persephonie was able to go return home for a time but always had to return. Now I'm not thinking Sesshoumaru, at least at this point, will let Kagome go far from his reach, but will there be a time when she can visit her family if she swears to return?

Just curious, love the fic and wait with baited breath for the following chapters. Ta-ta.
person Lunar84
schedule July 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I have to say I'm really enjoying this fic. Everyone is in character, the story flows beautifuly, and though the plot is overused this is still a very enjoyable read.

Having said that, I was reading some of the other reviews and noticed there were a few that said you were not going to make this a happy ending and that these two were pretty much going to just remain how they are. I'm confused because there are no author notes saying this is what is going to happen. I guess you deleted them? Not sure.

If that is the case that is truly sad, because it seems you lost one devoted fan that used to reveiw for you consistantly. I'm sure there will be others who will do the same. It's your story though, and i respect that. You write for yourself. But, if you do happen to write to also please the masses I dont think a fic without a developing relationship between these two characters is going to make anyone happy.

You really are a great author and this story has alot of potential. I hope you can shed some light on these missing author notes. And what your plans for this story are.
schedule July 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Again this chapter thrilled me, it is so far from the norm, and its so raw and blunt that I love it so much. It is a hot story and I cant wait for more, u have hooked line and sinker. Hope u update soon, a=cant wait to have more...
schedule July 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
EEEEEEEEEEEEEPPPPPPPPPPPPPPP!!!! sesshoumaru that bastard, but that chapter ruled, he seemed so clueless, the bluntness the rawness, and POOR KAGOME...sigh, i dont see this turning out very promising for her...lol. MORE