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Now this is why it´s called "Proserpina" =)

I loved this story. Keep up the great work and I can't wait for your next piece.

I have really enjoyed this story; I'm sad to see it is finished already. One comment on the ending, though: although I liked a lot about this final chapter (Sessh's decision to not kill her immediately was nice), I thought the very end (with Kagome back in Inuyasha's arms) was rather abrupt. For example, I can't imagine that Inuyasha would just go ahead and accept the arrangement Sesshomaru was proposing -- yet it seemed like he (Inuyasha) was almost acquiescing in the arrangement with his final thought, "for now." If you are going to go back and revise the last chapter, I suggest trying to flush out how Sessh will ensure that he can get Kagome back from Inuyasha (one suggestion might be by playing on Kagome's own sense of duty, like I'm doing you a favor by letting you go, thus you must promise to return for half the year). Or even better (rather than revising this ending) would be to see a sequel, since your story is otherwise so enjoyable.

YAY!!! i liked the ending, it wasn't fairytalish, it was realistic, and thats something i really appreciate. Great job!

Loved it, loved it, loved it!! ^_^

Good take on a Greek/Roman myth. I always wondered how you were going to take this concept. I like it. I only wish there was more only because I love your smut. I liked the ending.

love the story so far would you mind if i ask if they are going to fall in love with one another it would be a great way to make the story even mor einterestng since he already desiers her flesh perhaps nw his inner dogcan claim her soul (lol sounded abt odd here sorry for thath) but i really like the story i would like to ask if you can from now on email me to normamourani@yahoo.com whenver you update this story i really love it and maybe we can be friends?

Wow... Just lovely. I hope you decide to write more S/K.

heck man u could have made it longer than cut us so short all of a sudden. It was good, too good, hope u make a sequel or i hope she gets away to her own time, atleast thats my hope. Love the interpretation of the mythology and I do hope there is a sequel down the line somewhere.

Bravo!! Bravo!! I think the last chapter was fantastic. I smell sequal though...lol! Thank you for writing it. I really enjoyed!!