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for Proserpina

by Cathartesaura

person tnew78
schedule February 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I just read this entire little fic you wrote and found it to be amazingly good. You drew me into the story, wondering what would happen and where it would go, and I loved how you used the Greek myth. And no, as much as I long for more, it doesn't need it. The ending was perfect just the way it was. Excellent job.
person marcia
schedule February 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Well that was pretty damn skippy. Part of me wants a sequel and part of me thinks it could spoil the story.
person Auraki
schedule January 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
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person Anon
schedule December 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
person Diana
schedule December 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I loved this story!! It was written so well. I'm hoping for a sequel.
person Manni
schedule December 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I didn't like the story. It made me sick while reading it but by some morbid curiousity that killed the cat, I kept on. You have a good ability at writing, I can't deny that. And the story had such a REAL quality to it (which was what made me sick. The fact that I could picture it actually happening). Unlike some people who write stories that suck and just throw in poorly written rape scenes because they think it will spice up their pathetic attempt at a plot.
Still, I know Sesshomaru's cruel but I always thought he held his honor in too high a ragard to ever rape someone.
But you were good at evoking an emotion out of me and in the end, that's what writing is for. I have to give you credit for that.
But don't bother updating anymore. You really did end it well (even if it wasn't happy), and sequals tend to ruin things.
schedule November 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Although I usually like to read about Kagome and Sesshoumaru in more romantic situations, I must sat that I rather enjoyed this! I found it to be well written and well within the bounds of believability. Very nicely done!
schedule October 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
AHHHHH SOOOO GOOOOODDD! PLEASE CONTINUE THE GOOD WORK! if you plan on writing another sessho/kagome fic, can you e-mail me at ohsnap_theresa@yahoo.com? thank you!
schedule August 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
great story are you going to wright a sequel?
schedule August 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
An interesting take on Sesshomaru's character and a twist at the end that I did not expect. To tell you the truth, I thought for sure that you were going to let her die. It just seemed to be leading up to that until, well, until he kissed her. I realized then that he was growing to care for her--in his own demented way. Hot sex, nice story. And it was comforting to see that she was able to return to her friends...even if only for a little while. Thanks for the read!

~Rin