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April 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
A pinch of constructive critisiscm-Spelling, grammar, tenses for a start. -Blepause i cants unerstood you wehen yours don re edit, m'tay?-
Other than that, the idea is a bit loose and could use a bit of direction, but not bad. Also, poor Inuyasha. Everyone's being mean to him, calling him a immature, insensistive hanyo when he's grown up all his life hearing how worthless he is from both humans and demons and had to virtually raise himself.No wonder he has such a tough outer skin.
Other than that, the idea is a bit loose and could use a bit of direction, but not bad. Also, poor Inuyasha. Everyone's being mean to him, calling him a immature, insensistive hanyo when he's grown up all his life hearing how worthless he is from both humans and demons and had to virtually raise himself.No wonder he has such a tough outer skin.
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May 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yes I will do the beta for you. You can email me at katwithblueeyez@yahoo.com anytime you need me to do the beta for you.
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May 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Real good can not wait to read more of this story
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April 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I am so happy finaly a hermonie and inuyshia cross over i have been waiting for someone to write one of these YEAH NOW MY FLYING MONKEYS CAN GO BACK AND SULK AND MY UNICORN CAN DO THE TAPDANCE ARCOSS THE YARD sorry hope to read more of this