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for How Jealous You Make Me

by oddball88

person inugirl2003
schedule April 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
He sticks his finger in her and she comes immediately? Wow, wish it were that easy hahaha. A little unrealistic, but I thought very sexy and even more romantic how he talks in his head about his wife. I thought what he felt about her was VERY charming! Thanks for the quickie:)
person weyrdkat
schedule April 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This story would have been much awesome-er if you hadn't had her bare-assed in the first part, and in shorts and panties the second. . .just a note.