rate_review Reviews

What a lovely beginning! I shall certainly continue reading.

You write wonderfully!

I keep thinking that you're copying word for word from a book, editing parts to make it fit Sesshou-Maru and Kagome, but then I remember that the book was lost. Needless to say, I'm impressed! Your writing flows so well together and you have a wonderful eye for detail. I threw a very large temper tantrum when I didn't see the 'Next Chapter' button. People thought I was crazy.

And Sesshou-Maru seems so vindictive and unaring right now that I love it! Go Sesshou-Maru! I'm very curious about the prologue though, and how that will effect him now. And the step-mother (Izayoi?... actually, her 'obsession' with Sesshou-Maru makes it sound like either Kagura or Sara... it could be Rin but I see that as a Father/Daughter relationship, so that's gross...)... she seems... I don't know... manipulative? The way she treats Sesshou-Maru is kind of creepy. It's like she prefers Sesshou-Maru to her own child. *Gasp* Is Kagome her child?! Did she sell/give Kagome to Higurashi?! AH that's horrible!

But I get ahead of myself... I don't know that that's what happened... I just have the inclination...

Anyway, I suppose I will have to wait in impatience for the questions jumping around in my head. Thank you for sharing your visions with us and please keep up the great work! You have me in awe!

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I Agree

This seems like it could be very interesting. I swear, i think I've read the book too, if the part about walking behind until she asked him to stop is part of it. That rang a bell somewhere in my dusty brain, but not enough of one to remember a title, dang it. I look forward to more - the writing style and wording is very appealing.

So far I love the story I cannot wait to read more. Please post a new chapter as soon as you can.

Meh, I dont wanna be rude or anything ao ill just offer...

There is some errors, email me or tell me your Screen Name
and I'll go over it with you, Kay? Just thought I'd help ya.. =D
But some ppl dont really want any so I won't push..
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are you sure you cant remember the title of the book or the author? i know i read this somewhere and wanted to read it again but i cant remember. oh well i can barely remember anything except for the fact that the dad gambled away the child and the girl was chosen so i'm glad to read it (or something close to it) again. please update soon.

I reallly like this story!! I can not wait to see what happens next!! Is it Kikyo? I am not really good at these guessing games!! Just please up-date soon!! I have to know what happens next!!!

The story is sounding more familar by the minute...I do love this...your version, I can not wait to see how Hiro reacts when Sesh picks Kagome to serve him for a year. I suspect he already knows who Kagome is...maybe not, we will know soon enough...so update soon....Please :)

The stipmom is kekeo the die prests !

It is Inuyasha's Mother...the baby is Kagome. I'm guessing, Inuyasha hasn't yet been born. Kagome is human and is only Sesh's stepsister and not his half-sister. I am liking this story....I hope I can figure out what story this is based on...If I can and I have read the same story, I will tell you the title of your long lost book...I have read tons over the years and I hope I can help you remember your favorite book's name. Anyway, great start to this story, I can not wait to read your next update, please try and update soon. Great Job.