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by l80hawk

schedule January 31, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I realize that it has been a long time since you've updated, but I juuuust wanted to encourange you to do so, lol. I really am enjoying this story. It has pretty smooth transitions considering how fast-paced it is. I like the sexual tension and buildup that the story is gathering. It's a shame you haven't added anything to this in so long! Still, I remain hopeful that you'll return!
person Alicia
schedule April 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
hhhhhhhhheeeeeeeeeeeeeyyyyyyyyyy!!! that was getting sooo good! Why did you leave it off there? e-mail me when you update it please. I am not one for AU fics but this one is good.
person zianeu
schedule April 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is really cute-- the story, that is. I don't mean it in a condescenging way like 'awww, that's cute, they're telling a story...' I meant in a fun romantic comedy way like, 'awww, confusion and everyone secretly knows everyone else and wackiness and sex ensues!'

Also, wow, starting us out with 11 chapters. I almost didn't start because of such a daunting number, but it was worth it! Thanks for sharing this!