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for A Broken Heart of Gold

by obsidiantresses

schedule April 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Man you got me on a hook with that ending to the second chapther.And also,WOOOOOOW....Inuyasha had mated Kikiyo.....I'm not gonna ask why I'm just asking ,how?I mean really shes made of clay and shes a zombie!(just not looking for brains just souls)But I that you did something different cause I wouldn't have guessed that he had.And she was finally gonna give it up,that was a surprising save or ending either way I love it so far !I hop you write more !
Love Always^
^Dei Dei