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for The Shadows of Time

by ryukotsusei

person Takhisiss (nsi)
schedule April 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I am the first one to admit that my knowledge of TB is limited but from what I do know it seems to me that you've managed to keep them in character very well. Naraku needs to die, I hope that it won't take Tres and Abel (I assume it will be them?)long before they catch of with him or I shudder to think what havoc can and will be wrecked upon the world. I'm curious as to what the plan will be to catch him. Update soon please.
person starcrossed
schedule April 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*dances around before trips up, being the ungraceful woman she is* YESSHH! Another chapter out! I luvvesh it! I really liked how you've blended the two animes and I can't wait to see whats next!
person Starcrossed
schedule April 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
T-T What do you mean your only going to post it every two weeks!?! I can't live that long! -_- It's such a good story, please continue! I really like the two series you are mixing and your writing is amazing too!

I can't wait till the next chapter! =^-^=
person madmiko
schedule April 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow! This just takes my breath away. I'm so excited to see this go up! ^_^ The beginning here is just so powerful and shocking and agonizing and SAD. The final battle followed by Kagome's decision to go home, only to have to watch the horror of her family's massacre and her own torture and death. It just tied my stomach up in knots. NO ONE writes those scenes like you do. The interactions of the whole group were so good and Naraku's evilness has never been so brutally plain before. This is such a tense, edge-of-your-seat, nail-biting thriller. I can't wait for the next chapter to go up!!!!
person VB
schedule April 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
YOU'RE BACK!!! yeah yeah yeah yeah! ...yeaaahh I'm running off 3 hours of sleep in 72 hours and its 6 in the morning. I should be sleep but I had to rid this first. I love it already. Now you just have update your other fics and all will be right with the world.