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May 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like it, I love it, I want more of it.
Great job shaping up Tres character, he's human but you're still keeping him in tune I like the changes. Miroku is adorable and I love what you're doing with everyone. Pretty damn gritty with Inuyasha facing his failure, I hope this knocks some sense into him. I like the thing about Abel's life span being far reaching, you keep the science of the show flowing. And Abel's and Miroku's 'they're not real' lines were great and funny. I love, love, love your work darling I look forward to each and every update.
Great job shaping up Tres character, he's human but you're still keeping him in tune I like the changes. Miroku is adorable and I love what you're doing with everyone. Pretty damn gritty with Inuyasha facing his failure, I hope this knocks some sense into him. I like the thing about Abel's life span being far reaching, you keep the science of the show flowing. And Abel's and Miroku's 'they're not real' lines were great and funny. I love, love, love your work darling I look forward to each and every update.
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May 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow, I'm glad that you decided to give Kagome another body, it's the only way that I could imagine them having any chance at all of beating Naraku. Having Midoriko show up and what she did with Tres was a surprise but a good one. LOL, for some reason I've always liked the ancient miko. And poor Shippo with his thoughts of never seeing Kagome again. I can't wait to see how it all plays out. Update soon.
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May 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow, this chapter was something of a tear jerker in it's own way. You've done an excellent job dealing with the emotions of the moment and bringing them to life for me. LOL, but that's one of your talents as an excellent author I suppose. I wasn't sure who I felt more sorry for in this chapter. As much as InuYasha tends to be and is an arse when he actually saw what had happened in Kagome's time in the future I think that knowledge hit him hard. I know it has his Kagome hard as well, but as you said she'd had a lot of time to discuss it with Kagome where to him it was all brand new. I can't wait to see what else you have planned. Update soon.
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May 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
So sweet and smart I love what you're doing with this. I have one question is Esther the Queen of Abloina or just a nun? I love how you did Esther in this and her inner monolog on her personal views on killing, very nice. I adore Abel worring about Kagome's dress size, so freaking cute.
I love Shippo's take on Tres being Miroku's reincarnation, that was very funny. I love the ceremony and the explination of it for the Goshinko.
And this was a great freaking line 'Hold strong, Father Tres, God will see you through this trial and I pray that your pain will end quickly.'
Highlighting Abels faith and concern is so freakng great, I love the religious parallels of east meets west with Abel and Kagome.
You really surprised me with the story twist but I really like it and it give hope to the future changing and makes everyones death less sad.
I love this a lot I'm eagerly awating the next instalment. Oh and Tres is hawt! You're so freaking smart to write this.
I love Shippo's take on Tres being Miroku's reincarnation, that was very funny. I love the ceremony and the explination of it for the Goshinko.
And this was a great freaking line 'Hold strong, Father Tres, God will see you through this trial and I pray that your pain will end quickly.'
Highlighting Abels faith and concern is so freakng great, I love the religious parallels of east meets west with Abel and Kagome.
You really surprised me with the story twist but I really like it and it give hope to the future changing and makes everyones death less sad.
I love this a lot I'm eagerly awating the next instalment. Oh and Tres is hawt! You're so freaking smart to write this.
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April 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Awww this was such a sad chapter. Thank goodness you told how the vampires came about I never figured it out in the anime. I love how you've writen everyone and you're doing such a great job. This was very good and I'm really looking forward to the next chapter.
I really do love your work darhling.
I really do love your work darhling.
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April 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hum...the plot thickens...^-^
*emo tear* I'm sad Sesshy had to die, but I'm happy Shippo still lives (for now, not sure of that ending
-_-).
I'm just wondering what disease Seth and Abel are gripped with, I don't exactly remember Naraku having that ability besides the masma stuffs. Oh well, I really stopped paying attention to the show when school got so heckic.
Anyways, good chapter! Can't wait till the next one!
*emo tear* I'm sad Sesshy had to die, but I'm happy Shippo still lives (for now, not sure of that ending
-_-).
I'm just wondering what disease Seth and Abel are gripped with, I don't exactly remember Naraku having that ability besides the masma stuffs. Oh well, I really stopped paying attention to the show when school got so heckic.
Anyways, good chapter! Can't wait till the next one!
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April 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You're breaking my heart with losing both Kouga and my Shessy. But you really did a great job keeping everyone in stelar character. I can't guess were you're going with this and I love all the twists and turns. You're really moving the story at a break neck speed.
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April 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Well... I never thought I'd see the day that Sess would fall to the likes of Naraku but you've shown me how wrong I was. I wonder how many more are going to die before Naraku meets his end, assuming he does. "He does meet his end in this story doesn't he?" I also am left to wonder how many or who from the Vatican will die? Anyway good chapter, I can't wait for the next one :D
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April 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
How could I have missed this! I love, love, love the pairing you're giving me goosebumps. I adore Tres and look forward to what you're going to do with him.
Man you are brutal, the whole buring of the witch/miko thing, the poping eyes ....
I've missed you so much darhling:)
Man you are brutal, the whole buring of the witch/miko thing, the poping eyes ....
I've missed you so much darhling:)
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April 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Luving Tres, luving Abel. I like the Sister Kate thing having the jewel. Gawk you really make he hate Naraku, very good. A hero is only as strong as the villian. I'm really looking forward to the next instalment, I can't wait to see Kagome again.