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for The Shadows of Time

by ryukotsusei

schedule June 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Another wonderful chapter! I love how you incorporated Jinenji into the story and having the group interact while Kagome is out is always a treat. *Gotta love Miroku's hentai personality. XD* I look forward to your next chapter update! (And I would love to watch this series if you wouldn't mind giving me the d/l link. Email is sayurinakamura@gmail.com. Thanks!)
schedule June 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love how you're filling in for Jenji's back story, and you did a great job with his Mom the money thing was very in character. This was a very clever story twist and I quite enjoyed it. I love the whole 'laying' on Kagome thing that was very funny. Inuyasha's only looking at results and Abel is killing me with seeing thru Miroku in a moment.

I'm still aching for our good I hope everyone feels better soon.
schedule June 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ohh pretty realistic with the wound care, I always liked your attention to detail. I'm dying to see why Naraku's dream did physcial manafested.

I love tender Abel, love attentive Tres. I'm so looking forward to a three way,,, but I'm getting ahead of myself here. I love what you're doing with everyone and am totally pumped when I get a new update notice... YEA!
schedule June 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Well... I guess that will teach InuYasha to doubt what Kagome says won't it. It's really kind of sad that he had to go back and see everything for himself instead of taking her word for it but I suppose I can understand it too. Except that nothing with Naraku is ever as it seems. Good job on this chapter :)
schedule June 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yep, things are definitely different in the future where Tres and Abel came from I can understand the confusion and uneasy feeling that everyone would be experiencing when Abel explained about being a crusnik and a cyborg turned human. I think you did an excellent job bring that across. LOL, I can imagine it would be about the same as our own reactions if , say Hiei, suddenly appeared and tried to explain what his life in the Makai was like. Once again great job.
schedule June 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
...wow. Just wow. Again you have amazed me. I always have enjoyed your stories and this one is no different. I don't know Trinity Blood at all, but I wikied it and got the basic storyline down. I'm very interested in seeing what you came up with. I think you're the only authoress that I've read that does death and I don't shy away from it. The way you have this going so far is just...amazing. I agree that a simple battle would just come back to bite them in the backside, but to have him do that to Kagome...it's almost ironic. She was accused of being a witch in the past, and then, she was burned at the stake like one. I've never seen anyone else do this, and again, I am thoroughly floored by the uniquness of your stories. I look forward to reading the rest that you have uploaded. Keep up the awesome work.
schedule June 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I adore the Yusuke reference! This new chapter looks great I love that Abel is considering her as well, nice touch mentioning Tres's smexy voice. I'm straped for time 'dern school' but I will leave a longer review latter. I love this story, its on of the best TB I've ever read and a very new twist.
schedule May 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like thing about Shippo not liking to walk. Mm nice mentioning that Abel's got to deal with the distance he puts between himself and others. I luv the semxual tension between Tres and Kagome, very nice. I've been rewatching the TB series and enjoying how smexy Tres's deep voice is. Have fun at the com my dear, I saw your pics at DA and your coz is off the hook.
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schedule May 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yeah, glad you updated! I know you're alive, where ya been? Haven't seen you on yahoo in months. You totally ran away from me and I'm crushed! You don't love me no more, *runs away to have a crying spell*!!!! I look for you everyday, and each night I go to bed disappointed. Oh, where has my Misty gone? Email me or something! I know where you live, (kind of). I miss you! Yours, Kim!
schedule May 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Kagome asking Tres to come 'sit' by her was very cute. I like what you're doing with him and addressing things like, hunger and his first headache. Him carring her was so sweet, he's such a honey. It was really funny having Nightroad as such a city slicker, not knowing how to camp and such. I'm luv'n this story, its such an orginal pairing. I'm thinking that Naraku is probally going to pull the same-ish trick that he did before with him and Kikio, I'm looking forward to seeing where you take this.