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by salomewilde

schedule May 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*claps* loving this still! It's cute how Inu clings to Miroku's robes... if at the same time kinda sad. Wonder what's up Sango's butt? Anyway, can't wait to see another chapter!
schedule May 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm still loving Inuyasha in his child mindset & why is Sango acting like a bitch to him? Can't wait for the next chapter!!!
schedule May 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Just found this story and loving it!!! Hope to see an update soon.
person Peya Luna
schedule May 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
you somehow manage to make this cute and hot at the same time - amazing!! can´t wait for the real lemon, i wonder who will be on top ;-D though i´m dying to read the reactions of the group upon their return with inu in this state, and most of all inus own reaction as soon as he´ll remember...will him and miroku become a `real` couple or will he rip the monk a new one?!
schedule May 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
:P

You know how I feel about this fic. I love head injuries, and I love Inuyasha crying for his mother, and I love his clumsy seduction and Miroku's uncertainty.

I told you this was good. Gotta love it.
schedule May 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
oh wow. How have I missed this? x_x It's awesome! XD I love the idea. heheh I can't wait to read more!
person Buho
schedule April 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I loved your story. You brought a new vulnerability to Inuyasha that I have never come across before.
I really hope that that wasn't the end of the story. I want to see how you would continue it.
person pseudohanyou
schedule April 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You HAVE TO continue this story. Just when I thought I was getting smut...BAM, you hit me with the end of the chapter. So cruel...
schedule April 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Now that's interesting.

Not at all what I expected. Though his mother as she is portrayed has always annoyed me. She spent too much time being sad and not enough time preparing her son for the world in which he must live in, and giving him the tools to live in such a world. Too much time being "sad" and not enough time beating heads for not treating her boy right.

Not that I have issues with her, don't be silly!!

But this is good. I like head wounds. They're full of interesting. *grins*

It'd be interesting to see how others would react to this. Maybe Sess. *snickers* Actually that could be an interesting scene...'chibi'Inuyasha would want to play with Rin.

Hmm. Not sure what you have planned, but maybe that's something to consider?

Looking forward to more!!