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for Finding Daddy

by salomewilde

schedule October 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*sobs*

It breaks my heart. I want Inuyasha to have his Houshi-Daddy-sama forever and ever!! And I want Miroku to have that lovely guilt-happy feeling for ever and ever and ever too.

*scowls*

*kicks Kagome and Sango* SPOILSPORTS!!!
person vexed wench
schedule October 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
“Miroku-sama, can I call you ‘Daddy’?”
That was just so sweet, it didn't at all read like the who's your daddy type kink.

Miroku really is being sweet and caring .

Poor Inuyasha his miserable childhood , he deserves a do over and then some.
person vexed wench
schedule October 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
"when he kissed with his whole soul seeking love"

That just killed me.

So sweet I love Miroku so much in this.

*scampers off to see the next part*
person vexed wench
schedule October 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
"Her look was a little bit like Mother’s, and he felt badly that she could not afford more clothing. He wonders why Miroku or the others did not get her some—they did not seem poor, but he did not want to ask"


I love that more than I can ever express, her clothes always bother me.
I am enjoying this whole 'verse, really great!
person vexed wench
schedule October 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wow!
Now that I am all caught up.....MORE please more.

I am wondering about Kagura, will she squeal to Naraku or maybe tell Sesshomaru, who I am not even sure if he is in this 'verse , that he may be able to kill Inu once and for all now.

Maybe play on Inuyasha's child like mind to feel bad for her , being as mistreated as they both were/are.

I feel bad for Sango and Kagome well you know how I feel about her so I am not even going anywhere near there.

Shippo is darling !

schedule October 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*wibble* Miroku! Oh, he has got to be okay.

This is... good. Disturbing to me in some levels since I thought I'd never like this sort of thing. And yet it's too sinfully good to pass. Luring me in with it's wicked ways and intricate plot. What a ride, indeed.

person Edward Houshi
schedule October 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
oooh, a new chapter! And a new cliffhanger...Please update soon, it's a really good story!
schedule October 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I still love this story and hope to see more soon. I like the blend of Miroku viewing Inu as an adult and then as a child. it's very endearing how he calls him 'my inuyasha' little worried about kagome ruining the moment though.
schedule October 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Glee! I love Miroku in this, how he wants Inuyasha, but actually has a conscience. The guilt makes the act of forest-blowings so much sweeter.

More, more!
person Traybell
schedule September 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
hope you contunue really good so far.