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by salomewilde

person Saraste
schedule April 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
The ending had me squealing my little fangirl heart out!*squeals more* Just so. Damn! I was all loving the angst and waiting for the worst and then, bliss, my boys lovingly humping each other's brains out. Only a touch sweeter. And the image of Inuyasha jumping up to battle Sesshy in the nude is permanently seared to my brain now, making me drool compulsively.

This is a nice style to do them in, and your way to portray Miroku very enjoyable. He wants to care but falls to Inuyasha's advances, all the while reprimanding himself. The way you dance around the subject of adult!Miroku/child!Inuyasha and the sex was subtle enough for me to not be all freaked.

A very nice fic which only flaw was that it was too short! Want more cuddles! XD (No really, it was and is good.^-^)

schedule April 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
*wails loudly*

But I don't WANT it to be overrrrrrrrr!!!
person peyaluna
schedule April 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
what a short ending....does that mean now that they´re a couple or that they´ll just screw around behind the girls back? and what exactly healed inu, the sex, the sight of sess, or...? *damn, i hate unanswered questions* any chances for an epilogue?
schedule January 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
There's more right?? It can't be left like this....That's just cruel
person Edward Houshi
schedule January 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
awesome again! I love hoe you characterize everyone. Great job, and please kep it up!
schedule December 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
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person vexed wench
schedule November 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
YAY you updated!
This is so good I was happy to see the next chapter.
Vexed
person karadenia
schedule November 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i love this fic. i hope you post another chapter soon. it breaks my heart every time sango's so cold to "little" inuyasha and he feels her, um, hate? jealousy? anyway, can't wait for next chapter!
schedule November 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh this is truly a masterpiece!! Can't wait for the update!

Onyx aka Lynx212
schedule October 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*applauds* Man! I love this story. stuff is really starting to heat up. Can't wait to see where you take this!