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I think you should go forward with this. Please update as soon as possible. Thanks.

I've read this before, but had to check it out again when I saw it is nominated for awards at the IYFG. I am always blown away by your writing, but you outdid yourself with this one. You managed to pack so much emotion into such a short piece. The sex is hot, but it's their thoughts about each other that really make this piece stand out. There's a slight poignancy about their situation, the way they feel they need to keep their relationship hidden from everybody else and that they feel they can't plan for a future together yet. This is just rich and full and beautiful.

*quibbles* This was beautiful! Absolutely glorious! I love how tender they came across, and the fact that either one thought they were getting the better end of the relationship they had! As always, madmiko, your story makes me melt! I salute you!

Wonderfully done.

that was beautiful. Keep up the good work and update soon.

Beautiful. Just beautiful. The imagery was amazing and the hot interaction between these two never ceases to amaze me. And the way you had each one in their own thoughts and how they really ARE just astounded me. This writing was just...ah. Not enough verbs to describe my happiness at reading it. Thank you for writing, and sharing it. :)