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for Punishment by Dragon

by salomewilde

schedule August 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMFG please write more!!!!
schedule April 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
will never look at au-nu the same way again. lol lol. i don't know what more to say than that. it left me speechless..
person pseudohanyou
schedule April 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow. That was fucked up...but in a good way. You can totally write sadism, if you so choose...but I think you love to see him love her. I guess it's possible for him to be a sadistic bastard and still love her because, after all, sadism is a sexual preference and really can go either way when it comes to emotional attachment.

Either way, hooray to this one-shot. See? Now I have to put one up to prove to you that I can write yaoi. <3

-Carrie
person Ivy
schedule April 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was really sad but you captured Rin and Sesshomaru's feelings beautifully.
person orvida
schedule April 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wow that was simply indescrible erotic but in a nasty way i hope that you do win your hotness pionts for that story simply something else.