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by MomoDesu

person Anon
schedule April 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
interesting story... great update... like it so far... so kagome is going on another date... maybe she'll get sango & miroku together after this concert date with miroku... and seems that inuyasha was jealous... wonder what happens next... update as soon as you can... please and thank you...
person Patty530
schedule April 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I am so sorry for your loss. It still was a pretty good chapter overall and it it better to do something constructive rather than nothing at all.

*hugs*

Patty
person zianeu
schedule April 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm glad you're back-- I know what you mean in what you said in you A/N. Sorry to hear about the death in your family.

If it makes you feel any better, I think this chapter was very good. Sort of a segue, if you will, to the rest of the story.
person zianeu
schedule April 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Can't remember if I've said so yet, but I really like this story. It's just the kind of everyday angst that I find so very irresistible sometimes. Takes one right out of their mundane problems and into someone else's far more romantic (because it's not one's one) mundane problems. You have a great style. I'm always happy to see that you've updated.
person Suikidoen
schedule April 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
D: Another breakup chapter! NOOO! With who!?
schedule April 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
ah, kookookitty... kokoronagomu. what's in a name? anyway i just realized i have been reviewing this on two different sites with two different screen names. sorry.

the 'date'... seems like she's meeting a whole bunch of frogs but she's already living with her prince. what other tortures and sufferings do you have in store for the poor girl? a date with big bird?

all in good fun, i enjoy your story and your writing.

thank you,
ginny

schedule April 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wow... great idea... :)
person Patty530
schedule April 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great Job. I'm really interested in what comes next. Looking forward to the next update.

Until next time,

Patty
person Clover_babe
schedule April 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
awww.
poor Kaggie.
that must've been sooooo effin' embarrassing.
ah boys.
what can you do?
XD
hopefully it'll get better for both Inu and Kaggie.
person Anon
schedule April 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
interesting story... like it so far... at least kagome, inuyasha & kikyo get along... when inuyasha & kikyo break up maybe kikyo will point out to inuyasha that kagome is more what he is looking for... wonder when inuyasha & kagome will realize their feelings for each other... update as soon as you can... please and thank you...