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I LOVED IT,you have talent with lemons...ive read soem good lemons but i really liked yours.Hope you write more great lemons!!!

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I really enjoy reading Dance Among The Cheery Blossom couldn't stop reading it i hope you add more to this Stories of Sesshoumaru & Kagome AdultFanFictions

i love the story it was really good for your first lemon

I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?

I really liked it! You defintely have a talent for writing. I couldn't tell it was your first lemon, because it was so beautiful and eloquent. Hopefully, you add more chapters to this but it's great as a oneshot =)

Very good for your first Lemon! Made me tingle lol but I almost wish it was continuing or was linked to Mine I would've loved to keep reading this I love the traditonal matings between Sess and Kags, haven't read one in a long time *tears* oh well hope you make another one-shot soon I love them great job!

Arry

I personally loved it!!! I think this was a great story and LOVED the lemon!! I would loved iti f you considered a sequel or more chapters to this one!!! I would love to see how you would transform Kags!!! I loved it, very good story!!!

SEQUIL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! plz

i really liked it that was great for a first lemon wow lol i really think you should add more chapters to it because that didnt really sound like an ending it sounded more like the story was just beginning anywho good job you should feel proud it was a good story so give yourself a pat on the back lol

I think that it is a good atempt at a lemon. Now I admit I like to read smut and what I have found that makes some smut better than others is the perspective. You did an excellent job discribing the physical act. What you probably want to explore now is how to discribe the sensations that occur in the individual during the different stages of foreplay and consumation. Like I said, I think this is a good first attempt. I am at the same point with my writing, where I am trying to figure out how to write a lemon. There are some great authors out there that have mastered this art form. You could read the progression in their works to see how they have obtained it.

Emily