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by angelicmemories

schedule June 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
please finish writting the story I really do love it very much
schedule May 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like it and can't wait to read more.

You said that Kagome eyes are green. In the manga her eyes are blue but brown in the anime. Don't know about Sota in the manga, but in the anime his eyes are brown
person Kitty Passion
schedule May 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Souta's eyes are brown in the anime....just like all of Kagome's family including Kagome herself...although i do prefer the blue eyed pictures of her that sometimes appear....so ya...keep up the great story!! ^_^
person rachel
schedule May 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love your story!! Please update ASAP!
person Noacat
schedule May 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Well, being that Souta is Japanese, I'd say he'd have brown eyes as brown is the most common color for most Japanese people.
schedule May 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
sota's eyes are the sme color as kagome's eyes are. they blue in the manga and chocolate brown in the anime
person lanier
schedule May 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wow, This was more than I expected. Kagome is holding up very well although I fear for her now that Naraku has discovered her secret. Cant wait for more.
person Anon
schedule May 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really enjoy your story so far and am looking forward to upcoming chapters. I do have a quick question, though. It may just be my computer (or maybe just on this site), but chapter 8 in your story doesn't seem to be loading correctly. It cuts off right after the disclaimer. Is this a problem with the website, do you think? If so, have you posted this story on any other sites so that readers might be able to read that chapter?
Again, I really look forward to future updates. Please continue the excellent work!
person Amber
schedule May 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Love your story! I am wondering if you will be making Kagome in to a demon and make her a little darker from being held captive.
person ut0pian
schedule May 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story. I'm glad I decided to give it a chance. I don't usually go for stories that make Inuyasha the villian since it's so OOC, but you're making it work. By the way, did I miss a chapter? When I was reading what was labelled as chapter 9, I couldn't help but feel I was missing something since chapter 8 displayed blank.