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for It Breaks My Heart

by ramenbandit

person Ewe
schedule April 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
this is interesting....please keep it going. you don't see alot of these kinds of pairings.
schedule April 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really enjoyed this story and I must admit now I'm hooked. Keep it up.
Carey Ann Lupin
schedule April 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Well, I DEFINITELY like this! I really, really loved that line when Kagome asks if Ban-Chan will atleast dump her body there. It just seemed so sentimental and despite the fact the situation seemed so dire! It's awesome! Keep up the great work!
person emmaren
schedule April 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I do not usually read anything out the s/k group, but this one caught my eye. You have a very well written beginning here, and I will definitely keeping checking to see if you update it. Please do.

Emily
schedule March 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great story! Loved it! Would liked to talk to you about continuing it-have a great idea. Contact me at Danyealle@GMail.com