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for Unlimited Determination

by BeautifulOblivion

person sunset in love
schedule November 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
ah, seeeee..... i have the complete collection of the anime, till end chapter 166, (and will purchase should continuation be made available) and i believe that sesshy does in fact held some emotion towards Kaggie, affection of some sort, perhaps a little respect and adoration, too bad though sesshy will be the 'not so good guy' here, but i love it all the same, you are one great autor you know, you have me waiting for another, guess one is never enough... not even when you are done...
person Phoenix Wolf
schedule November 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ooooo .....

Um, quick question ... where do the dog tags tie in? More like, when did Sesshomaru put them in her hands?

Still loving this story! I wonder how Koga will react when he "discovers" who the Doctor is, if he didn't already know, and what will he do when/if Kagome tells him what Sesshomaru did in the supply closet?

Please update when you can(hopefully soon!), yours is the first story I check when I come to this site!

Until we meet again.
person osherry
schedule November 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ah, so now I get it. From your clues it is either Sesshomaru or Naraku. Since Naraku was blown to bits in the series I am assuming it is actually Seeshomaru (who is hot and sexy in his own right). Oh and poor Inuyasha! I bet he'll show up as an old man. But now he's too late...he finally lost to Koga. Man, I'm feeling sorry for Yashy boy now...I hope that Kagome at least gives him a little kiss. Oh, I was an English Lit major and I currently get my kicks writing fan ficts.
person L0VER
schedule November 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
YAY.another chapter!! :) thehe. they're so adorable .. i cant wait to see what happens. and Omg.. i hope the ugy isnt goign to do what i think he's going to do. and you know.. im surprised he havent thought of like.. using a needle to paralyze her or something .LOL. im so evil :| anyway. i cant wait for more! ^^
schedule November 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hey! Another chapter! *cheers*

Hmm ... I wonder who the Doctor could be? Sesshomaru is a good guess; but it could also be Inu Yasha, if he managed to mellow out quite a bit!; Then there is the possibility that it is Naraku,if he wasn't completely destroyed during the battle for the Jewel, and went into hiding; there are endless possibilities ...

I love that you are drawing the story out and keeping us guessing! The suspence of what is going to happen next keep me coming back and re-reading your story again and again!

Can't wait to see what you have up your sleeve for the next chapter ... I wonder what Kagome is going to do to the Doctor ... *evil grin* And what will Koga do when he hears about the Doctor's intentions with his mate?

Update again soon, please!!!

Until we meet again.
person caliha
schedule November 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
updates hurrah! I know you're busy and all.... so thanks for the updates :)

I really want to know who this doctor is....he's naraku-ish in sadistic nature... heh
schedule November 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
oh my i love it im been guessing who the doctor is but cant wait till you reveal who he is. cant wait till the next update. :)

person sunset in love
schedule November 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
hi lissa, somehow, i also enjoy picturing kagome and kouga pairing, if kouga is absolutely in love with kagome then why not... but let me guess, the doctor is seeshoumaru, the fearsome but lonely demon lord... anyway, i love the story and hoping for an update anytime soon...
person osherry
schedule November 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OK. So who was the doctor who attacked Kagome? I'm assuming it was Sesshomaru or is it the evil Naraku? I like the idea of Fluffy still being around better. Now where is good old Inuyasha? And how is he going to feel now that Kagome and Koga are mates? Ok, keep writing. This is the first (and probably only) Kag/Kog story that I'll read. Inu/Kag always! Toodles. Ai.
person L0VER
schedule November 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
YES!!!!! an update! i've been checking everytime i visit this site. tehhe, ohman.the begiining of this chap. phew, was holding my breath there.. but the end kinda made up for it. my heart is still kinda racing. lol, i cnat wait. update sooN!!!!!!!! and my story.. hm..im sort of having a writers block. i have nothing down but the title. tehe <:) i have today and tmr to do it before im busy again!