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for Unlimited Determination

by BeautifulOblivion

schedule January 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
PLEASE UPDATE!!!!!
person osherry
schedule January 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hey Lissa,
I was going to e-mail you, but now your e-mail address is hidden again. So you get another review instead! OK, here's a few ideas. You can keep them or toss them...

Now honestly, if I was writing this fict it would end up Inu/Kag. But since it's not me... I still like the idea of sympathy sex. So here's an idea... She goes on a date with Inuyasha and goes home with him. She tells him that she's staying with Koga and marrying him. But! That she had intended to marry/mate/have sex with Inuyasha before the well closed. So she's willing to give him sex JUST ONCE because it was something she was going to give him anyway before the well closed. That way you can squeeze in realistic lemon with Inu/Kag with some touching love making. I also like the idea of Inuyasha giving Kagome away (if he can handle it).

And of course Koga will love to rub it in.... "I always told you she was 'my woman'!"

Then perhaps Inu and Koga can fight off Sesshoumaru who is making himself a bit of a nuisance. And I don't understand why Kagome isn't slapping Sessy with a sexual harassment lawsuit. I mean the guy is way out of control at the workplace. Hey, he's hot--but it is sexual harassment.

By the way, I had thought originally that Inuyasha would look like a senior citizen and that was why he never told Kagome who he was.

OK those were my little ideas...
person Phoenix Wolf
schedule January 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hey!

I missed two chapters! *whimper* Ahh, but I just finished reading them and I likey! *snicker* Can't wait for the "date" with Inu Yasha ... it'll definately be interesting seeing as Koga thinks it is just the two of them ...

Yes, I am VERY happy that the Holiday season is over, but also kinda pensive. See, I'm seasonal right now, and I'm really hoping that they will keep me on after inventory, which is what we are setting up the store for now ... ('.');;

I can't wait for the next chapter! Hope that it is soon!

Until we meet again.
person L0VER
schedule January 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
i lost my internet connection for the last week or so.. so i didnt get to read any updates. so. YAY, 2 chapters for me :). but anyway. honestly.. i have to say.. inuyasha seemed so CREEPY in the beginning ... idon`t know.. maybe its just me. but until he talked about his wife.. it returned to normal . ahah x) anyway. i cant wait to see what happens next. and i`m definitely going to read your new story. as a matter of fact. im gonna go read it now!.. i`ll tell you what i think about it then :D
schedule January 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
ah thanks for clearing that up. This chapter was good how inuyasha talked about his mating.
schedule December 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yay! Thank you for updating so soon! I like the new chappie! I am interested in how Kouga is going to react to InuYasha. Update soon!!!
person osherry
schedule December 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ahhh! Kagome finally ran into Inuyasha. He better have a good reason for not seeing her sooner. I'd love to see him make some moves on her even though she's mated to Koga. Hee hee! That would make my day! Maybe she could give him some sympathy sex... Oh la la! Oh, I'm horrible. OK. Keep writing!
schedule December 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow so Inuyasha is Old. how so? Is it because he is Henyou? How he mated too?
schedule December 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Please update!
person L0VER
schedule December 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wow. i thought things would get bad ..but i guess not ^^ kouga is so cuteeeee. omg .. i can only dream. anyway. icant wait to see what happens next! ^^ i cant bring myself to hate sess.. ahha