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Yay! New chapter! Thanks! This one seemed a lottle shorter than usual. Who was watching her? I am dying to know!

great story. I have a website for KxK fans and I was wondering if I could link to your story?

I'm kind of like that too. I can zero in on typos and errors in other people's writing, but not when it comes to my own. I have to re-read my writing at least twenty times until I'm sure I find everything.

Hmm... I find it interesting that Inuyasha is so open with his family about his past. Although I guess it would be kind of pointless to try and hide his ears from his kids and grandkids. But I wonder if he was ever concerned with the kids blurting out their dad's/grandpa's family secret. Although, I guess no one would believe them anyway.

Oh and I was pretty glad that you made that doctor Sesshomaru. In that chapter when the two of them fought and Kouga got knocked unconscious I was thinking, “Ah c’mon! That guy was only human! Give Kouga some credit.” But it was Sesshomaru so that’s a different matter.

0.o oohhhh mmyyy gooddd!!! you are jesus!!!!!! this is seriously the first reallllllyyy good kouga/kagome story iv read in a LONG time .. not the same ' inuyasha hurt her and kouga comes along and saves the day!! YAY!!' storie!!! and the twist with sesshoumaru!! brillant!(sooo did not see the coming...actually i thought it was..well not him ) :) i truthfully could not stop reading.. i tried and failed epicly!! all i have to say is please update ASAP!!! .. or i might cry .... you have made my day... that is all.... becaues lattly .. there have not been any storys that catch my intrest like this one has i give you props !! lots n lots of props!!!!

P.s... update !!! please!

Sinful~Sammi

Wow I love this story. It's so well-written. I did notice a few typos here and there. For example, twice you've typed in "Kagome" when you clearly meant to type "Kouga." You might want to watch out for that in future chapters.

Other than that I love the plot. It's very gripping and you describe things very skillfully. Like when Kagome is at the hospital you take the time to describe her day briefly, but still descriptively. I felt so bad for Kouga in this chapter. The fact that Kagome felt embarrassed about kissing him when she saw Inuyasha has got to feel like a knife to the heart. Ouch.

Please don't take long to update this. It's so good. You've have just won over another faithful reviewer in this reader.

Ok. This was a GREAT chapter! I am sure that is no suprise to you! haha! With Kouga knotting inside of her does that mean she will be getting pregnant! OH! How cute to have little Kougas runing around!

Yippie! Another chapter!

Heart-wrenching for Yasha though, as he had to see the two embrace, but he will have to face facts of go crazy ... not liking that idea.

So, when is Sesshomaru going to come back into play? And when are these two ever going to go on vacation? THAT will be interesting ... unless they leave after a confuntation with Sess, who gets caught "molesting" Kagome again. You know ... I doon't really like the idea, but maybe, just this once Koga can beat the crap right out of Sesshomaru (like that would ever really happen) after flying into a rage because he caught the two together? Just an idea for you to play with, or not.

I hope you update again soon! It felt like FOREVER since your last update.

I seemed to have made it through inventory, and am still currently employed, and I hope that it will last! *sweat-drops*

Until we meet again.

Love it so far and I'm only on the third chapter! Can't wait to keep reading!

YAY!!!! You updated!! That was a good chapter! I knew Inuyasha was not about to let go of his feelings. I hope that he does not try to come in between Kouga and Kagom though. I am curios about what will happen with the Sesshoumaru situation. Kagome needs to tell Kouga so he can be aware that something else might happen. Keep up the GREAT work and update soon!

wow. the awkward feeling when others hug, I KNOW HOW HE FEELS! and awww poor inu :( honestly.. why cant kag just get ALL the guys? HUH! then i wouldnt have to feel bad for anyone, and everybody would just be happy!! :)